Saturday, March 22, 2014

Rock of the Ancient Mariner, forward, chapter 1?

He stomped to the fore deck with every inch of a master seargents authority.  Officers and noncoms stepped out his way.
Not just because of his girth, squarish, short loaded with muscle an attitude.  Respect: he had saved innumerable vessels with his engineering brilliance and though he was on of the oldest, he was regarded with awe and every crewmate felt safer knowing he was incharge of propulsion.

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nv master chief
ch200 people ief okay
hair incident
marine corp

clint eastwood, played mster seargeant.

hat off remove cover
carry respect as an officer
khakis like ofrficer
dont call mee sir i work for a living

npncom
had y\to enlist
work for every advance, stripe




goog morning sir vs master chief
button missed on shirt
throw a salute

scariest person senior chief
nothing
seen or heard
always some one with bigger rank that you needed to suck up to.

they met
non come tying shoes,
limited space say kahikis
sorry sir
did you just call me sir
no sir yes maste chief
Let me tell you something recruit
ys sir
I work for a living.
Therefore you wil cal me master chief.  do you understand this recruit.
yes s-maste seargeant.
say again?
master seargeant.
good
and remember the little rabbit around the big (give techincal, secs realated ddescription)

Observed by captain.
harsh reprimand considering he only saw officer slacks and prob ably never ieven came near a ms, let alone spoke to one weaqring similar gear, head down and unable to see that special button on your shoulder.to our left eyeballing us.
I behaved exactly as ptehier expecas

No, sir.  Did you see those two skytechs pretending to inventory tools twent meeterTRIONS REQUIRE AS A MASTER SERAGEANT. tO DO OTHER WISE MIGHT RESK THE EXPECATIONS OF OF SUPERIOURS AND THE RESPECT OF SUBORDINATES.
CAPTAIN GLANCED AT TWO MEN WORING AGAINST THE WALL.
hOU NEVER MISS A THING DO YOU MS.
nO, SIR. AND THATS WHAT KEEPS THOSE UNGAINLY BIRRDS FROM GOING PLANETSIDE, NOT A SIGNGLE SIYSTEM MUST GO UNCHECKED, EVERY SUBCOMPONENT CHECKED AND CERTIFIED.
THATS WHAT KEEPS THOSE UNGAINLY BIRDS FROM GOING PLANET SIDE.
aND WE COMMANDER SKY JOKIES DO APPRECIATE THIS AND THOUGH WE LACK YOU ENGINEERING INSIGTS, WE DO OCCSIONALLY NOTICE SMALL IRREGULATRITIES.
ms PAUSDES, PERPLEXED, USCH AS WHAT SMALL EBACK YOU SLIPPPED IN YOUR BACK POCKET BEFORE YOU HANDED  THAT RECRUIT HIS ASS ON A PLATTER.
ms LOOKDS DOWN.  jUST AN EBOOK SIR, ONE MY GRNADMOTHER READ ME.
mIGHTG i EWNQUIRE AS TO THE TITTLE, ms.
SQUARES SHOULDERS, SMILES, AND PULLS OUT THE THATTERED EBOOK., THE COMPLETE WOWRKDS OF sAMUAQL TAYLOR cOLERIDGE.
cOLLERIDGE, mASTER, SEARGEATNT, tHE rHYME OF THE aNCIENT mARINER WAS ONE OF HIS BEST.
hIS 

bEST, SIR.
pERHAPS AND SOME LESS DIRE MOMENT WE COULD SHARE A DRINK AND OUR MEMORIES OF (USE QUOTE).

cHapter where capt reminiseces on hiring him...someone who mnever missies a thing, who wlhen something wasnt quite right, intuitive, not just techinial.  So he had arranged to have him relieased and sent here.  there was something not quite rigfht about this quadrant.

void fucked
void jump
void head
void tard
(void being description also void jumper, new propulsion system that made light bending speeds possible.

 chapter order
1. explosion something not right, not spec
2. Strella somehing wasnt right
3. Jaces reaction
4. Jace's father, story of reprimand, regret about outcome of alpha-T.  Old mans discharge. Awareness that Jace was late, sorrow about wife.
3. jaces reaction
5?  secene where strella comes home distraught, he is unfeeling and working on quadarant map. drawing xs across plentetoids that stood in the way of his plans.
6? Void rescue time, recovery, talked books--felt he owed him that,
discuss situation with albatross--chiefs response that though there appeared to be a cause effect, even a mere pulse technician would make that jump, life and these ships are too complicated, not a yes no binary system--yes he void fucked his whole crew and that's why he had to pay for it.
7. chapter or chapters on wisdom learned  fear of dark,look close, never miss anything

father or chief takes fatal space walk?
motivation of each
things rising eta in so many minutes, any kind of weapons would take us down  bbe gun
void jump requiresw that they jettis main drive system because of weight.
fagther locks door to drive pod.
the father turn to be noble...need to establish motive for going out.
8. Antherbase commader chapter

father first officer in first scene?

void stone...what it ells them, jace reads after being void fucked

Jc not jace old man name.\

mother's death related to commanders plans.

void jumping facilitated by creating spaceways, void sstones stry to warn them from folly.  
how does it connect with attack so that "not this time" works for person who knocks the other out.

something special about planet about to be destroyed (jace reads map, strella recognizes it from father's maps)

eating phos, phos eater jace finds the old man prospecting on night he abondons popular girs party.
went there hooping  to see strella only.  the dark is ccary.

8. scene talking t friend about party, not seeing all of him on vid, considered fool because he declines.

shuttle has just enough fuel to reach condemned planet.

something incredible there thaat must be saved, but what?

sees old guy working on machinery, winks and pulls out his galaxy rock.
jace pats his pocket. old man winks.
(implies previous exchortation to keep it with him for good luck)